Wednesday, April 10, 2019

the little shoe maker

The little Shoemaker


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In France, Strasbourg, there was a little shoe shop named Le Petit Cordonnier (French for shoe shop).  The shoes were alive. The owner of the shoe shop had a mohawk & had small square glasses. The shop was small and in the middle of two buildings. It is placed on a lonely street.


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A lady walked by and admired a pair of pink heels.
She was wearing a mustard yellow top with white polka-dots.
The lady gasped with delight.Just before she was going to purchase the shoes something happens.
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Beep beep a van stops right in front of French guy’s shoe shop. The man in the van was called Scottish guy. He hits a button & so many heels appear. The lady was hype and bought a pair of heels.


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Scottish guy gave French guy a mean smile. French guy makes a new shoe with a basket ball in his hand. But Scottish guy hits a button saying COPY and out comes soo many shoes with Scottish guy and a basketball.


Paragraph 5 Now French guy is poor. That night Scottish guy slipped a note saying I will pay you 79000 French dolares for his business. He signed the contract & waits till next morning.


Paragraph 6- In the morning he was on his way . But the shoes gave him a pair of gold shoes to give to Scottish guy. He gave the contract to Scottish guy and the shoes. Scottish guy wears the shoes and the shoes and make him run away. He ripped the contract.

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but he was not prepared for the challenge to restart. beep beep beep! French guy meets his new enemy……...Scottish guys brother………….....scottish guy guy.French guy clenches his fists.‘‘THIS MEANS WAR’’The hole stress has doubled.Scottish guy guy smashed his brothers van and challenged French guy.

4 comments:

  1. i like the amazing words you where use good job neelansh

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  2. Well done Neelansh i like how at the end as his name scotish guy guy it was really funny ithink next time you need to introduse scotish guy the shop owner first by saying his name

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  3. i like the amazing words your useing good job

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  4. i like the words your useing good job

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