Thursday, April 9, 2020

The cave

The scuba-diver couldn't hear a thing in the depths of the ocean. The only thing he could hear was his voice. Distracted, Mike went looking around the dark cave. Very few light beams from the sun could reach the depth of the cave. He looked down and remembered why he was down there. He shot down the cave until he reached a pitch black place. Mike turned on his torch but it blinked a few times and died out. Mike panicked, when he suddenly saw a massive streak of blue light. He thought that some other divers were lost below him. He used his emergency ,huge, flashlight and tried to get the divers attention. Well at least he thought it was a group of divers. He focused the light on the “divers” but then he realised… IT WAS A COLOSSAL ELECTRIC EEL!!! Mike swam and swam up like a bullet, knowing if he slowed down for even a second, his fate would be written. Once he had gotten into the shallow area of the ocean he slowed down. After his ,near death, experience he fell face down on the sand.  He knew he couldn’t let other people go to the dangerous site. He planted a sign and left. The exact moment he left a strong wind pushed the sign away into the ocean.
1 year later…

One day a family went down to a beach. Right then, a giant wave came crashing down on the beach. Luckily, the wave was out of range of the family. Once the water cleared out and went back to sea, the family saw something anybody had ever seen. A massive, dead, electric eel.

1 comment:

  1. Neelansh, this was a really tense and thrilling read. I think you did a good job describing Mike's emotions and actions in an exciting way. Well done :)

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